22. Positive or Negative - Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ? - PASS P.M.P

Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

AGREE – DISAGREE (VIẾT THEO 1 PHÍA ĐỒNG Ý / KHÔNG ĐỒNG Ý)

STRUCTURE: 2551

TYPE 1: ONE-SIDED ESSAY

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]	Many believe that S + V It is a common belief that S + V
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	From my perspective, I completely agree/ disagree with this view for several reasons.
BODY 1	REASON A	[3]	Topic sentence 1: The first argument given to support my opinion is that S + V
		[4]	1.1 Supporting Idea 1 (In fact, S + V)
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations
		[6]	1.2 Supporting Idea 2
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations
BODY 2	REASON B	[8]	Topic sentence 2: Another rationale behind my belief is that S + V
		[9]	2.1 Supporting Idea 1
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations
		[11]	2.2 Supporting Idea 2
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, I strongly believe that S + V

AGREE – DISAGREE (VỪA CÁI NÀY VỪA CÁI KIA)

STRUCTURE: 2551

TYPE 1: BALANCED ESSAY

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]	Many believe that S + V It is a common belief that + V
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	While I think S + V, I disagree with the view that S + V/ I still believe that S + V
BODY 1	SIDE A	[3]	Topic sentence 1: It is true that S + V
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: To begin with, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations (Cause – Effect)
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2 Another reason worth mentioning is that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations (Cause – Effect)
BODY 2	SIDE B	[8]	Topic sentence 2: Nevertheless, I would argue that S + V because of several reasons.
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1 The first reason to be given is that S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations (Cause – Effect)
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2 Moreover, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations (Cause – Effect)
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite the fact that S + V (Side A), I am of the opinion that S + V (Side B)

ADVATAGES AND DISADVANTAGES (VỪA NÀY VỪA KIA)

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]	Paraphrasing
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	This/ Doing this can have both benefits and drawbacks. Although this can have several benefits, its drawbacks should also be put into consideration
BODY 1	ADVANTAGES	[3]	Topic sentence 1: On the one hand, there are several advantages which can be reaped from + N/V-ing, (the most important of which are N1 + N2) On the one hand, there are several advantages of N/V-ing.
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1 First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2 Another benefit could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	DISADVANTAGES	[8]	Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, V-ing/Noun can still have several downsides, (which are worth being considered)
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1 One of the main issues is that S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2 In addition, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still has several drawbacks.

ADVATAGES AND DISADVANTAGES (VIẾT CÁI NÀY HƠN CÁI KIA)

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]	Paraphrasing
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	Although this can have several benefits, drawbacks of it are far more significant
BODY 1	ADVANTAGES	[3]	Topic sentence 1: On the one hane, there can be some minor advantages to N/V-ing
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1 First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2 Another benefit could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	DISADVANTAGES	[8]	Topic sentence 2: On the other hand, N/V-ing can have several downsides that outweigh/overshadow/surpass these benefits
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1 One of the main issues is that S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2 In addition, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still does more harm than good.

BOTH VIEWS

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]	There has been a debate on whether S + V
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	Although it is understandable why some think A (View 1), B (View 2) is still far more significant
BODY 1	VIEW 1	[3]	Topic sentence 1: There are several reasons to justify View 1, (the most important of which are N1 + N2)
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Another reason could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	VIEW 2	[8]	Topic sentence 2: Nevertheless, I still side with those who believe that View 2
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: This is because S + V This is due to the fact that
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: In addition, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite acknowledging why some think S + V (View 1), I hold the belief that S + V

CAUSES – SOLUTIONS; CAUSES – PROBLEMS; PROBLEMS – SOLUTIONS

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	Given that this can result from many causes, identifying them is key to finding appropriate solutions.
BODY 1	CAUSES	[3]	Topic sentence 1: There are several factors resposible for N/V-ing, (the most important of which relate to N1 + N2)
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Cause 1 (N1) First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Cause 2 (N2) Another cause could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	SOLUTIONS	[8]	Topic sentence 2: There are also various measures that can be taken (by A and B) to address the situation.
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Solution 1 (by A) First, S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Solution 2 (by B) Another solution could be that S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite several causes that can lead to N/V-ing, steps can be taken to alleviate this issue
Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	Given that this can result from many causes, identifying them is key to understanding adverse effects from it.
BODY 1	CAUSES	[3]	Topic sentence 1: There are several factors resposible for N/V-ing, (the most important of which relate to N1 + N2)
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Cause 1 (N1) First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Cause 2 (N2) Another cause could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	PROBLEMS	[8]	Topic sentence 2: There are many problems resulting from N/V-ing, (the most serious of which relate to N3 + N4)
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Problem 1 (N3) First, S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Problem 2 (N4) Another issue could be that S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, N/V-ing can result from many causes, and this can impose several problems (on N3 + N4)
Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	Given that this can lead to several problems, identifying them is key to finding appropriate solutions.
BODY 1	PROBLEMS	[3]	Topic sentence 1: There are several issues resulting from N/V-ing, (the most serious of which relate to N1 + N2)
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Problem 1 (N1) First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Problem 2 (N2) Another problem could be that S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	SOLUTIONS	[8]	Topic sentence 2: There are also various measures that can be taken (by A and B) to address the situation.
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Solution 1 (by A) First, S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Solution 2 (by B) Another solution could be that S + V/ Furthermore, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion, despite problems (on N1 and N2) that can be imposed by N/V-ing, steps can be taken to alleviate these issues

TWO – PART QUESTION

Introduction	Exact paraphrase the Question	[1]
Introduction	Answer the Question	[2]	This can affect (negatively or positively) in different ways.
BODY 1	PART 1	[3]	Topic sentence 1: (Affect in different ways)
		[4]	1.1 Idea 1: Way 1 First, S + V
		[5]	1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[6]	1.2 Idea 2: Way 2 Second, S + V
		[7]	1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
BODY 2	PART 2	[8]	Topic sentence 2: There are several reasons to justify why this can affect positively/ negatively.
		[9]	2.1 Idea 1: Reason 1 First, S + V
		[10]	2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
		[11]	2.2 Idea 2: Reason 2 Another reason could be that, S + V
		[12]	2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
CONCLUSION	Paraphrase the Answer [2]	[13]	In conclusion,

	OUTLINE 1
[1]	Paraphrase
[2]	Answer: Positive Chỉ viết 1 phía viết về phần thuận lợi – Dạng như agree – disagree
[3]	Topic sentence 1: drawbacks of using traditional sources
[4]	Idea 1: limited -> out of run in the long run
[5]
[6]	Idea 2: environmental cost
[7]
[8]	Topic sentence 2: benefits of alternatives
[9]	Idea 1: sustanable development
[10]
[11]	Idea 2:
[12]
[13]	Conclusions

ENERGY

(1) Green sources of energy = renewable sources of energy = solar/ wind/ hydro energy

(2) Cease (v) = stop

(3) Infinite resources: tài nguyên hữu hạn

(4) Deplete (v) = destroy

(5) The interruption of energy supply: sự gián đoạn trong việc cung cấp năng lượng

(6) Environmental degradation: sự hủy hoại môi trường

(7) Exhaust emissions: khí thải độc

(8) The culprit of: thủ phạm của cái gì đó

(9) By-product (n): sản phẩm phụ của cái gì

(10) Negligible (adj): không đáng kể

(11) A sustainable development: phát triển bền vững

(12) Offer a glimmer of hope: gieo rắc 1 tia hy vọng

In recent years, there has been a growing trend towards using green sources of energy like wind and solar power instead of traditional ones, such as fossil fuels in many countries. From my perspective, it is certainly a positive development for many reasons.

It is undeniable that those traditional sources have appeared and addressed energy issues for centuries, but they are not without drawbacks that it is time to cease using them. First, since they are infinite resources, if humans keep exploiting them, they will be depleted in the future. Consequently, the interruption of energy supply would be unavoidable if there were no alternatives. Another disadvantage of using energy produced from fossil fuels relates to environmental degradation. In fact, exhaust emissions like CO2 that are the culprit of global warming are by-products of energy production from coal, oil and natural gas.

On the other hand, investing and using new alternatives can bring loads of benefits. One of them is to provide inexpensive energy for humans on the long run. Although some might suggest initial installation costs for renewable sources of energy are high, they appear to be negligible compared to the amount of money that solar and wind energy systems can save when it comes to long-term goals. Furthermore, the switch from using fossil fuels to greener sources is considered as a sustainable development as it helps alleviate environmental issues. In fact, global warming has been increasing at an alarming rate, affecting both humans and other creatures on the planet, thereby how humans can go further and develop sustainably without caring the environment.

In conclusion, despite the fact that fossil fuels still remain the most popular sources in many countries, the appearance and the use of renewable sources is obviously a progress, which offers a glimmer of hope for ensuring sustainability of the planet.

WRITING TASK 2, Kiến Thức

22. Positive or Negative – Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

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