ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES
Cách 1: Viết 2 cái ngang nhau
| Introduction | Exact paraphrase the Question | [1] | Paraphrasing |
| Answer the Question | [2] | This/ Doing this can have both benefits and drawbacks.
Although this can have several benefits, its drawbacks should also be put into consideration |
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| BODY 1 | ADVANTAGES | [3] | Topic sentence 1:
On the one hand, there are several advantages which can be reaped from + N/V-ing, (the most important of which are N1 + N2) On the one hand, there are several advantages of N/V-ing. |
| [4] | 1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1
First, S + V |
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| [5] | 1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
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| [6] | 1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2
Another benefit could be that S + V |
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| [7] | 1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| BODY 2 | DISADVANTAGES | [8] | Topic sentence 2:
On the other hand, V-ing/Noun can still have several downsides, (which are worth being considered) |
| [9] | 2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1
One of the main issues is that S + V |
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| [10] | 2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [11] | 2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2
In addition, S + V |
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| [12] | 2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| CONCLUSION | Paraphrase the Answer [2] | [13] | In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still has several drawbacks. |
Cách 2 của Advantage – Disadvantage: Viết cái này hơn cái kia
| Introduction | Exact paraphrase the Question | [1] | Paraphrasing |
| Answer the Question | [2] | Although this can have several benefits, drawbacks of it are far more significant | |
| BODY 1 | ADVANTAGES | [3] | Topic sentence 1:
On the one hane, there can be some minor advantages to N/V-ing |
| [4] | 1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1
First, S + V |
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| [5] | 1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results
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| [6] | 1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2
Another benefit could be that S + V |
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| [7] | 1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| BODY 2 | DISADVANTAGES | [8] | Topic sentence 2:
On the other hand, N/V-ing can have several downsides that outweigh/overshadow/surpass these benefits |
| [9] | 2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1
One of the main issues is that S + V |
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| [10] | 2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [11] | 2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2
In addition, S + V |
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| [12] | 2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| CONCLUSION | Paraphrase the Answer [2] | [13] | In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still does more harm than good. |
In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in a small family unit, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In many nations, people in huge cities either live alone or in a small family unit, instead of in large, extended family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?
In recent year, it is recognized that in most of developing cities, people prefer to live in a small family unit or even live apart from family, rather than stay at extended families. This can come with both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, living alone or in a small family unit can bring plenty of negative development for both individuals and society. People following this trend are likely to have the feeling of isolation or loneliness. It is resulted from less communicated, not enough social conversations when they spend most of time for themselves or small family, which also might lead to the neglect of relatives or neighborhood in emergent cases such as diseases or robbery. Another disadvantage could be that family bond between family members is under threatened. Since adults or youngsters do not share the same roof with older generations, they are lack of essential interactions to build up the family relationship.
On the other hand, people found several positive effects from this lifestyle. Learning or strengthening survival skills is extremely beneficial for young adults. The life of student living away from home is a good example. While his parents worried about their son whether he could adapt well in new society, a fresh man like him, who is less reliant on their parents when moving out, become be an independent person by acquiring critical skills from cooking skills to monthly financial balance. Separating from extent family also burden finance shoulder for breadwinners, who will work longer hour or multiple jobs to cover the daily expense for whole family.
In conclusion, people are free to opt for the appropriate life by considering both sides of those lifestyles.