2. ADVATAGES AND DISADVANTAGES – Viết theo cách 2 Advantage và Disadvantage ngang nhau
| Introduction | Exact paraphrase the Question | [1] | Paraphrasing |
| Answer the Question | [2] | This/ Doing this can have both benefits and drawbacks.Although this can have several benefits, its drawbacks should also be put into consideration | |
| BODY 1 | ADVANTAGES | [3] | Topic sentence 1:On the one hand, there are several advantages which can be reaped from + N/V-ing, (the most important of which are N1 + N2)
On the one hand, there are several advantages of N/V-ing. |
| [4] | 1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1First, S + V | ||
| [5] | 1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [6] | 1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2Another benefit could be that S + V | ||
| [7] | 1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| BODY 2 | DISADVANTAGES | [8] | Topic sentence 2:On the other hand, V-ing/Noun can still have several downsides, (which are worth being considered) |
| [9] | 2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1One of the main issues is that S + V | ||
| [10] | 2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [11] | 2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2In addition, S + V | ||
| [12] | 2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| CONCLUSION | Paraphrase the Answer [2] | [13] | In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still has several drawbacks. |
ADVATAGES AND DISADVANTAGES – Viết theo cách ý cái này hơn cái kia
| Introduction | Exact paraphrase the Question | [1] | Paraphrasing |
| Answer the Question | [2] | Although this can have several benefits, drawbacks of it are far more significant | |
| BODY 1 | ADVANTAGES | [3] | Topic sentence 1:On the one hand, there can be some minor advantages to N/V-ing |
| [4] | 1.1 Idea 1: Advantage 1First, S + V | ||
| [5] | 1.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [6] | 1.2 Idea 2: Advantage 2Another benefit could be that S + V | ||
| [7] | 1.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| BODY 2 | DISADVANTAGES | [8] | Topic sentence 2:On the other hand, N/V-ing can have several downsides that outweigh/overshadow/surpass these benefits |
| [9] | 2.1 Idea 1: Disadvatge 1One of the main issues is that S + V | ||
| [10] | 2.1 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| [11] | 2.2 Idea 2: Disadvantage 2In addition, S + V | ||
| [12] | 2.2 Examples/ Explanations/ Results | ||
| CONCLUSION | Paraphrase the Answer [2] | [13] | In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from N/V-ing, it still does more harm than good. |
In many countries, people like to eat a wider range of food that cannot be grown in their local place. Therefore, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages? (Real test: 13/04/2019)
Nowadays, the food eating is very diversified and imported from many other countries. People eat the food not only growing in their area but also coming from other places. Although this can have several disadvantages, advantages of it are far more significant.
On the one hand, there can have some disadvantages to eat a wider range of food that cannot be raised up in their local place. First, regarding the price, these food are often higher than domestic food, which not many people can afford to buy them. This is because there are many elements including in this cost such as cost of product, shipping cost and tax. In some kind of food, the shipping cost or tax is higher than the cost of product. Another drawback could be that food are no longer fresh and many preservative is often used to keep food fresh. As the result, it makes the serious diseases for users in later.
On the other hand, eating a wider range of food that cannot be grown in their local place can have several advantages that outweigh these disadvantages. One of the main issue is that the these are often imported and provide more kind of food with high quality As the result, people are well served and have more many options for daily eating. In addition, the import or export also urge the economy by trading activities within and between countries. For examples, Vietnam exports a lot of rice for the countries where they can not grow it and imports other food such as apple, blackberry and cherry.
In conclusion, despite benefits that can be derived from eating a wider range of food that cannot be grown in their local place, it still does more harm than good.